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SasuNaru Chapter 1

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In truth Sasuke always liked Naruto ever since the first time he had met him.  But the more and more missions they did together, the more sasuke realized how much he loved Naruto.  So one day he decided to make a move.......It was a simple mission really, all they had to do was escort an old man to tanzaku town, but the only thing was that it was only Sasuke and Naruto because Kakashi was out o another mission and sakura was in the haospital getting her broken leg repaired.  (she tripped over a tree branch and broke it).  They completed the mission succesfully and on the way back while jumping through the trees Sasuke decided to come clean.
"Hey, Naruto wait up, i need to tell you something."  They both came to a stop on a tree branch.
  "yeah?What is it?"
"Well I.......I just wanted to say......that......."
   "What, what is it?"
"......I love you Naruto, I really do"
  "........................"There was complete silence between the two of them.  All of a suden Naruto fell of the tree branch.
"NARUTO WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!" Sasuke jumped down from the tree and caught Naruto before he hit the ground.  Sasuke checked his condition and realized that he had fainted
'he's unconsicence.......great what do I do now?'  Thoughts of him and Naruto naked in bed together spung into his mind.  "No!" he said alound but still continued in a lower tone
"I cant do that to him especially since i dont know how he feels about me yet."  *sigh* 'I guess ill just take him to my house, it is closer than his.'  With that Sasuke walked to his house carrying Naruto in his arms..........
------------------------------------Later that day-------------------------------------------------

Naruto awoke and found himslef lying in Sasukes lap "where am i sasuke?"
"your at my house," he replied "you fainted and fell off a tree."
    "why did I faint?" asked Naruto who didnt remember a thing. "and why am i lying in your lap?" he added as he got up.
"well i kinda told you that i love you......"  Naruto stared at him with his jaw dropped.  Sasuke took this reaction the wrong way though as he said
"I knew it."  Sasuke said sadly "I knew you were probably gonna reject my feelings......Im sorry ive probably wasted enough of your time, you can go now."  Sasuke then started walking slowly to his bedroom.
     "No,Sasuke!  Wait!"  Sasuke turned around with a look that seemed like he had lost everything in his life.
"What, are you going to make fun of me?"  Sasuke asked in a depressed voiced that made it seem like the Apocalypse was going to happen within the next three seconds.
     "No, of course not."  replied Naruto.
"Then what is it?"
     "Sasuke.........I love you too."
Whew =) i just started writing these a little while ago. Please tell me what you think and if you want some more bacause ill be happy to write more

Truthfully i didnt really like this it didnt feel right to me but i want to hear your opinion so please tell me
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i am major fangirl so mwhahahahhahaha GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SASUKE!
naruto:i have a bad feling abt her
sasuke:i think i'll get along with her quite well
me:you will oh you will
naruto:?????
me/sasuke:mwhahahahahahhahaha